Sunday, July 15, 2012

Hookers and Hangers Blogfest!

Today I'm participating in Falling For Fiction's Hookers and Hangers Blogfest. Thanks ladies for hosting such a fun contest! Now on to my lovely Hookers....


My "Hookers," aka first lines from some of my chapters, are from my recent manuscript, THE BEAUTY OF DESTRUCTION. For a little bit of background about my story, here's my one sentence pitch:

Mia, a fifteen year old amnesic dead girl gets stuck helping another lip-glossed and venomous teen prevent a vengeful school shooting, only to discover the real story behind her own murder.

Chapter 1: Any minute now, Valerie Wittier will wake up, and I’ll remind her of what she’s done.


Chapter 3: From the moment I opened my eyes, I knew exactly where I was and not to trust it.

Chapter 6: All I can see are images of their bodies lying there, looking like cast aside baby dolls.


Chapter 13: Rain falls in billowing sheets like a heavy curtain of tinsel.

Chapter 34: A triad of lines like a tiny bird foot creases the space between her brows.

Chapter 35: “He has a gun.” The breathless words came from her mouth, though she was sure they’d been someone else’s.

Chapter 36: My stomach is tight and twisted – a thick, knotted, nautical rope coiled inside me spreading through every inch of my torso.
 

31 comments:

  1. No only am I hooked. I want to read the book. Awesome job. Plus great logline. :)

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  2. I agree with Stina, your pitch line is really great. I don't know if you did this on purpose or if it has to do with the story, but your 3, 6 and 34 you mention what she can see or something about her eyes. It is kind of a neat effect. I am excited to see your hangers.

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  3. Thanks ladies! Sydney - I didn't notice that! Ha! Thanks for stopping by!

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  4. Great lines. And your pitch intrigued me too.

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  5. OMG these are so great! I really, really, really want to read this now based on the pitch and the hookers! Well done!

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  6. Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! I got chills after reading the first one! So good!

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  7. Wow! this are amazing! Great job!!

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  8. Omg, these are awesome! Chapters 1, 6, and 35 are my favorites! These would definitely keep me reading. Love the pitch, too! :D

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  9. No 13 is my fav, such strong imagery :) Can't wait to see your Hangers!

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  10. Great pitch and first lines, I actually want to read this book now! Best of luck in the contest!

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  11. I'm with A W Exley on chapter 13. Wonderful!

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  12. Nice hookers. The story line sounds intriguing. Can't wait to read your hangers. Enjoyed reading your posting!

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  13. OOOHHH! Very good. I'm totally hooked, I want to know more!

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  14. After I read the first one I knew I was hooked!! The rest are such great imagery. Love these!!! Can't wait to read your hangers.

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  15. That first line is awesome! Awesome! I want to read more! I want to know what she did! Well done!
    (ps. Please tell me Kimberly Gabriel is a pen name, 'cause it's so cool. I'm jealous.) ;)

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  16. Great 1st line of a book, let alone chapter. Well done. I definitely want to read on and see what the deal is. I'm a new subscriber now. This Bloghop has been great for finding new blogs! Cheers, Jeannette

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  17. Wow, that pitch is SUPER good. And that first sentence is creepy. I just picture here there, sitting over her, waiting for her to open her eyes. Ah!

    Thanks so much for participating!

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  18. They kept getting better and better! Totally loved these hooks:)

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  19. I vote #1, though they are all great!

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  20. Very eerie... loved it. The first line of chp 1 is great.

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  21. Excellent hooks, a lot of them were filled with tension and intrigue, but my favourite was: All I can see are images of their bodies lying there, looking like cast aside baby dolls. - excellent imagery.

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  22. Some of these hooks are very intense. I like #35.

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  23. I am way beyond hooked. I need to read this. Really. This was awesome!

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  24. yay another thriller!
    first line totally snagged me!
    exciting all the way! great!

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  25. You have awesome imagery! That's enough to hook me on its own. These hooks really seem to jump off the page (or screen). And the pitch is great!

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  26. That's a really interesting premise for a story, and the first line is definitely intriguing

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  27. Oh, I like the tinsel simile. Very expressive!

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  28. These are all amazing! Great job. This is probably my favourite:

    A triad of lines like a tiny bird foot creases the space between her brows.


    mostly 'cause I love tiny animals. hehe

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